Saturday, October 31, 2009

Poetry Unit: Activity 1

Music and Poetry...are they similar? Listen to the two forms of self-expression and then answer the following questions in the blog. You'll find the definition of both below, use the definitions to help you answer the questions.

Poetry is an imaginative awareness of experience expressed through meaning, sound, and rhythmic language choices so as to evoke an emotional response. Poetry has been known to employ meter and rhyme, but this is by no means necessary.

Music is an artistic form of auditory communication incorporating instrumental or vocal tones in a structured and continuous manner

or

Music is the art of arranging sounds in time so as to produce a continuous, unified, and evocative composition, as through melody, harmony, rhythm, and timbre.




Angel Of Mine - Monica

When I first saw you I already knew
There was something inside of you
Something I thought that I would never find
Angel of Mine

I look at you looking at me
Now I know why they say the best things are free
Gonna love you boy you are so fine
Angel of Mine

How you changed my world you'll never know
I'm here for now, you helped me grow

Chorus:
You came into my life
Sent from above
When I lost the hope
You show my love
I'm checkin for you
Boy your right on time
Angel of Mine

Nothing means more to me then what we share
No one in this world can ever compare
Last night the way you moved is still on my mind
Angel of Mine

What you mean to me you'll never know
Deep inside I need to show

(Chorus)

I never knew I could feel each moment
As if they were new
Every breath that I take
The love that we make
I only share it with you
You, You, You, You

When I first saw you I already knew
There was something inside of you
Something I thought that I would never find
Angel of Mine

(Chorus)

How you changed my world you'll never know
I'm here for now you helped me grow
I look at you looking at me
Now I know why they say the best things are free
Checkin' for you boy your right on time
Angel of Mine

Go to the link below and watch the video.

http://www.dailymotion.com/video/x92cbd_brave-new-voices-mike_shortfilms

After listening to Angel of Mine and watching the poet, please answer the following questions in complete sentences with a partner in the blog. Don't forget to include your names, so you will receive credit.

1. Do you think that poetry and music are similar? If so, in what ways?

2. How are poetry and music different?

3. What are Monica and the poet, Mike, talking about throughout the song and poem?

4. What are some of the similies that Mike uses in comparison to how he is thinking about his girl? In example, I'm thinking of you like a hand thinks of a glove.

5. Monica describes her boy as being similar to who?

6. Do you think that you could express some of your feelings in the form of poetry or song? Which one would you rather use to express yourself? Why?


Poetry Unit: Activity 2

After watching Mayda Del Valle performing "To All the Boys I've Loved Before," please blog a response (don't forget to sign your name at the bottom) and then answer the following questions on a sheet of paper to be due by the end of the period (complete sentence).

1) How does Mayda feel about all of the boys she's loved before?

2) How do you know that she feels this way? Was it in the way she used emotion, facial expressions, or words? Remember, to support your answer with evidence from the performance.

3) What little girl is Mayda speaking about "taking by the hand?"

4) Why do you think that she lost that little girl in the first place?

5) What are your thoughts about "being priceless?"



38 comments:

  1. Q1:NO
    Q2:THEY ARE DIFFERENT BECAUSE POETRY AS FEWER VERSES/STANZAS THAN MUSIC.
    Q3:MONICA IS TALKING ABOUT SOMEONE SHE CALLS HER ANGEL AND MIKE IS TALKING ABOUT JOKES.
    Q4:ONE SIMILE MIKE USES IS IM THINKING OF YOU AS A BROKE PERSON IS THINKING OF MAKING MONEY.
    Q5:MONICA DESCRIBES HER BOY TO ANGEL. (DAQUAAN WASHINGTON)

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  2. 1 .yes they are they always have a meaning.
    2 .you slow poetry down with rap you are always active.
    3. they are talking about a metaphor not saying your like something but you are something.
    4. he is saying she is like something instead of her being an actual thing.
    5. monica describes him as being a angel.

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  3. ciara rosario
    leanne vargas
    1:we think it depends on what the song is about
    2:we think that the are just a like because they are talking about how love is so good
    3;they talkin about how love is do good
    4;the similar for the m that they are expressing they feeling about love
    5: she describes the boy like a angel
    6; i think that i can express me feeling in a poem

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  4. Q6:A SONG {DAQUAAN WASHINGTON}

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  5. 1 yes because it ivolves rhymes and subjects
    2 it is different because i really dont know
    3 love
    4 yea like
    5 an angel
    6 yea because u are expressing your feeelings



    serigne and omar

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  6. Q6:A SONG
    DAQUAAN WASHINGTON

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  7. 1) yes there similar because all music need a story behind it. you cant sing nothing for nothing.
    2)the music has like a beat behind it and has like ryhming word and peotry do not it just words explaing how u feel.
    3) that they like someone and the person that they like want to know what they thinking.
    4) like sock thinks about shoes like rocks think about sitting like hip hop thinks about hoes
    5) to an angel
    6) poetry becuase i cant sing so i rather express my feelings in poetry

    Elizabeth,tyler,anthony

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  8. 1. Yes, because poem's and music talk about love hate and almost everything.
    2. poems have you thinking about what they talking about music just says everything.
    3. they talking about how much they care about a person.
    4. like beds think about springs
    5. her angel.
    6. in a poem because i feel like you can say more in a poem then in a song
    by: Kisha Vega, and Adrina Farlow

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  9. Hey Students

    Ms. Shockley

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  10. Q1:SHE FEELS THAT SHE HAVE BEEN LIED TO BY THEM.
    Q2:SHE EXPRESS HER FEELINGS IN WORDS.
    Q3:HERSELF AS A LITTLE GIRL
    Q4:SHE SAID IT AND SHE EXPLAINED HOW SHE LOST HER.

    DAQUAAN WASHINGTON,JAIQUIN HERNANDEZ AND ALTHEA BARNES

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  11. 1.mayda felt strong about the boys she said what she hade to say.
    2.i know this because u can see it in her face and the way she said it.
    3.i think she talking about her when she was a little girl.
    4.beause she turnd into a different person.
    5.its a strong thing to feel theres alot thing that can happen in life.

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  12. 1. she hates them she sees they are worth nothing.
    2. she shows it in her emotions when she talks about her past she gets really emotional.
    3. she is talking about her self she said she deprived her old self of life and happiness.
    4. because she let her emotions get the best of her she let people use her heart in stead of her following her heart.

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  13. Ciara Rosario
    Leanne Vargas
    1; she talking about how man act like boys and they dont know how to love her
    2:i know she feels this way because she shows it
    3:she thinks about her self because she think that needs more
    4:i dont think she should lost the little girl in the first part because it express what she feels
    5:

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  14. 1)she felt hurt betrayed angry
    2)she spoke with anger loudness she was moving to much.
    3)she was speaking about herself
    4) she lost it in the first place becuase she flew to fast
    5) when i think about it i think that we dont worth nothing but in a good way

    elizabeth,tyler,anthony

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  15. 1 she felt like she love boys then her education
    2 when she was tell her poem
    3 she talking about herself
    4 when someone black mail her
    christopher jean

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  16. Activity 1
    1. music and poetry are the same because poetry is music because it comes with a flow and a beat just like music.

    2. poetry and music are different because poetry is where you say the words and music is where you sing the words.

    3.they are talking about there lovers or a person that they love and think about.

    4. he used similes like i think pf you like a rock thinks about sittong.

    5. monica describes her boy as an angel of hers.

    6. i belived that i could express my feelings in music because all the stuff thats happen to me would make people understand where im coming from.

    tatayana bailey peace

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  17. Activity 2

    1. mayda feels that the boys she's loved was mean and very disrespectful.

    2. it was in the way she used all of the expressions and more. she gave us feelings and it made us feel like we were there.

    3. she was talking about her when she was young and how she wishes she can go back and grab her hand and tell her that she was sorry for the things dhe did and how it happened.

    4. i think she lost that little girl because she fell in love with a man who treated her like crap.

    5. my thoughts about being priceless means that im not worth nothing.

    Tatayana Bailey peace

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  18. 1. all the boys that she loved heart her feelings or did not like her for on thing and that is sex.

    2. she felted really bad i would to.i feel sad when i got mad she waas vienting in her feelings.

    3. she talking about her self when she was a little girl and why it happen to her.

    4. she felted sad about her self it didnt wont happen to her.

    sad because i do not wont that to happento one it was very sad.


    Ciara Gregory Peace

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  19. Raheda miah

    1) yes, because you can express your feelings by writing a poem or singing a song.
    2) music-has like a beat to it a poem also has a beat to it to.
    3)monica talking about her lover. mike is also talking about his lover.
    4)some of the similies he said was like beds thinking about springs
    5)to an angel
    6)poetry i can

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  20. Raheda miah

    1)mayda feels very sad because the boys being with her and leaving her
    2)you can find out how she said it and used expressions.
    3)taking little girls and having sex with them

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  21. 1.I Think poetry and music are very similar because music is just poetry with a beat

    2.They are different because poetry and music have different feels when they are expressed

    3. Monica and the poet mike are talking about love

    4. mike compared things that belong and stated just like them him and this girl belong together

    5.monica compared the boy to a beautiful angel



    COURTNEY NICOLE THOMAS & rusheka

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  22. we would rather express ourself in a song because a song is catchy and you would be able to catch our feelings





    COURTNEY NICOLE THOMAS & rusheka

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  23. 1)yes they are similar because pOetry has tO dO with expressing yOur feelings and sO dOes music.
    2)POetry has a rhyme and music has a rhythm.
    3)they might be thinking abOut sOmeOne they had in their past life.
    4)like hOw feet think abOut sOcks and sOcks think abOut shOes.
    5)an angel frOm heaven.
    6)Cristal: ii can Only write it. I cant express it in pOetry because i dOnt like writing pOetry Or sOngs. =/
    Rochelly: maybe it depends what mOod am i in.

    Crissy (Cristal), Chelly (Rochelly))

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  24. Tj and Nelson- we like the songs and the poem
    we like the way he rhyme

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  25. tamara and jermario

    we say yes

    1) the songs people sing are sometimes poems and songs in one sometimes they rymes and sometimes it dose not

    2)poems are not the same as songs and poems is Diffrent from songs they do not have insterment and poems have rymes

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  26. 1).yes, rhyming,flowing pain,anger & sadness .
    2).Poetry is out loud & music is on a beat!
    3).They are talking about their relationships , Monica about her man & Mike about his girl.
    4).Im thinking of you like crayons think of paper.
    5).An angel
    6).yes, in a song because we believe it has more feelings & we like music.

    by:Daquane Wilson & Katherine Gross .

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  27. 1)yes they are similar because poetry has to do with expressing your feelings and so does music.
    2)Poetry has a rhyme and music has a rhythm.
    3)they might be thinking about someone they had in their past life.
    4)like how feet think about socks and socks think about shoes.
    5)an angel from heaven.
    6)Germina: ii can Only write it. I cant express it in poetry because i dont like writing songs.
    Rochelly: maybe it depends what mood am i in.

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  28. 1)yes they are similar because poetry has to do with expressing your feelings and so does music.
    2)Poetry has a rhyme and music has a rhythm.
    3)they might be thinking about someone they had in their past life.
    4)like how feet think about socks and socks think about shoes.
    5)an angel from heaven.
    6)Germina: ii can Only write it. I cant express it in poetry because i dont like writing songs.
    Tiffany: maybe it depends what mood am i in.

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  29. hey yo ben j and mishon is dumb sexy

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  30. Activity 2

    1).She doesn't care about them anymore, She is now loving herself
    2).I can tell she feels this way by her face expressions, the emotion she put into her performance & her words.
    3).The little girl she used to be.
    4).Because she began to avoid herself & thought about all her boyfriends.
    5).I believe being priceless is how to be, Because nobody should ever put a price on anybody.


    By:Katherine Gross ,Daquane Wilson,

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  31. she was talking about herself
    she was talking about her boyfriend
    Nelson & Tj

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  32. FIRST:maya feels like all her previous boyfriends betrayed her.
    SECOND:In one part she said how the mans hands smelled like other women.
    THIRD: the little girl she was talking about was her innocent self.
    FORTH: she lost that girl by joining all those awful men.
    FIFTH:priceless means you cant put a price on it.
    ROCHELLY RIVERA

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  33. someone copied and paste my work and i dont like that AT ALL! MS.SHOCKLEY YOU SHOULD DO SOMETHING ABOUT IT.

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  34. 1).Langston Hughes was raised by his grandmother,Mother & Step Father.
    2).His father tried to discourage him.
    3).Because they dont want them to succeed .
    4).No he didnt.
    5).1 fact ;He was born on febuary 1st 1902 & he died may 22nd 1967. 2nd fact ;One of hughes finest essays appeared in the nation in 1926.


    By: Katherine Gross & Daquane Wilson

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  35. 1).Being distroyed .
    2).False
    3). I think that the best statement in the poem is crust and sugar over like a syrupy sweet , because dreams if not being accomplished like sugar can melt & or dissapear.
    4).Similies

    By: Katherine Gross & Daquane Wilson .

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  36. 1).Live your life without problems & get money
    2).Im not sure.
    3).Becoming somebody successful .
    4).Yes my family is.
    5).Stay in school .

    By:Daquane Wilson & Katherine Gross .

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  37. 1.) I believe that when a dream is being deferred that it ether has stopped or he has achieved his dream.

    2.) False: i believe that when someone's dream is deferred that they already followed it.

    3.)i believe that the poem stated what deferred meant when it said "does it fester like a sore and run" because when you have a dream it builds up and you develop it until you finally complete it and the hope goes away.

    4.)it is a metaphor because in one verse he wrote "does it sag like a heavy load".

    rochelly and cristal

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